Falling out of sync

[Radio24]

Photoshop sketch/painting I started today. i'm not sure if i should work into it more. Any comments/new ideas are welcome and encouraged, Thank you!

This pic is way too big - i uploaded a smaller one below - but couldn't delete the original attatchment

[Radio24]

smaller pic

[Radio24]

Just an update with some quick changes and revisions. any comments welcome

[Orori]

I like it, but what the hell is it? Would be nice to see some human characters for identification/scale.

[corspufo]

seriously, I don't know what it is. I think it's a Halo type tube thing, but some vehicles or people would really help ground this picture.

Also, I think some more solid line work would really bring out the elements of the image.

[bestow]

inside of a zombie, thats my interpretation. best part about abstract: interpretation.

[nuki]

'tis the rollercoaster of puse man, can't u just see it? :P
maybe cleaning up/explaining it would help us see where you wanna go with it ;)

nook