Foundry room environment concept

[mikadoguff]

Like it says up there-----crit me!

http://www.bestest.ca/foundry.jpg

thanks for looking :D

[Lume]

was this done with markers?

nicely done

[Chromo48]

I like it. This is definitely well drawn. The only things I would crit on are a couple issues of contrast involving line and value.
You should vary the line weights. Make those in the foreground bolder than those in the background. On the value side of things, I would tone down the intensity of some of the lighting in the background, and the ridge above the lower cave entrance, I can't really tell why that light is even there. You could probably make some of the darks darker as well (the left wall of the near building), but overall, good stuff.

[mikadoguff]

Thank you. Very informative critique.

[metaphysiks]

dude, i really like this. i have only one crit. i think that an addition of a foreground will give a better sense of depth. teh diminishing detail helps but i think a better haze would help.
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