City-sacking fun

[Discoskull]

I'm still learning Photoshop...

http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/6140/sackofcadofp8.jpg

[Nquyet]

Interesting concept and point of view.
I'd show a bit more of the protagonist, though-why leave half of him out of the picture?
The lines are also a bit too heavy for my taste. I guess its your style, but you should consider making them lighter in the future.

[drd]

Interesting concept and point of view.
I'd show a bit more of the protagonist, though-why leave half of him out of the picture?
The lines are also a bit too heavy for my taste. I guess its your style, but you should consider making them lighter in the future.

I think you just haven't scrolled to the right. =)

[Flipnastywebby]

hahah point DRD

yeah the lines are a bit heavy but its a nice concept
I dont know about the half of the mans head in the bottom left
and the dude who got wacked right in the middle of the piece looks a bit out of proportion.



its good start!



slainte!

[maldrin]

really it is a pretty good composition, and I like the sense of depth you've given it. I'd make the protagonist pop a bit more - perhaps push a little more contrast there. the lines are what I think really break it up more than they should. punch down some of the darker lines throughout and use it just to emphasize shapes that really need to be important. If something doesn't have a hard-core edge on it (like the muscles in the corpse's arm), don't put such strong lines in.

Not sure about the folks at the bottom. Perhaps you should try it with and without them and see which works better.

[Jason Rainville]

Sorry to say, but any sense of violence, or brutal 'coolness' is shateered by the bright colours, goofly large hands, and the fact that the building closest to us looks like one of those inflatable bouncy castles you see at fairs.

The protagonist's left leg is completely twisted, there's no easily discernable lightsource, there's no colour dpeth, and the shaky scribbly lines do nothing, especially not convincing me of a lightsorce.

Sorry I can't offer much in the suggestion department, I'd probably say some colour studies would help...

[Discoskull]

Thanks for all the helpful comments and critiques guys, even that last...er...criticism.

I'll go about fixing it...gonna put in a more direct light source and get rid of most lot of those scribbles (what can I say? I was experimenting...)